2016-07-21 18:36:14 ¶ ●

## hi ok I really enjoyed the update and y'all did a great job, the art is a+ and the character development is beautiful, but also gamzee's dialogue has a lot of weird verb constructions like "I was being to think" and stuff like that got used over and over, it sounds a little awkward

Hmm, Gamzee’s speech does tend to be constructed in unconventional ways, but it’s possible we created more of a pattern with them than canon does. We’ll look into it!

Thanks for letting us know, and I’m really glad you enjoyed the upd8 overall :o)