Of the book previews, this one is the most readable. Which is to say, still not very. But with the help of waifu2x, here’s as much as I could make out of the author commentary:

Left:

“Because the animation went up on 4/13 it aligned fortuitously __________ There were always huge announcements ___ around what one might refer to as ___ to the fact that I kept getting significant ____. For example, something significant happened on just about every 4/13 after this, right up until the final page. Which was released on 4/13 of Year Seven.”

Right:

“You should be proud of me. I made it an entire year before I put myself in my comic. And not really just a jokey self-insert making fun of the idea of  self-inserts, though this is, in a stranger way, a legitimate character with a role to play in this story. It’s probably premature to start ___ to bear witness to a lot more of this tomfoolery before beginning to reflect on what educational merits there are to having a character in the story who bears the face of “the author” of the story. It’ll take a while longer to start to care what it means to examine and distort the meaning of that title. And the ___ with the fictional ___ who holds it. And to be perfectly clear with you, we may never start to care. But I WILL start to talk about it. You have been warned. “