## Tuesday, July 21, 2009

### Haiku #48

Countless drops of red
on my quivering fingers.
Cracked ketchup bottle.

#### 4 comments:

Anthony Clarke said...

  Metal hands of fire
  are just so difficult to
  use, correct, m'lud?
  I know its bloody murder of english grammar, but it was my third try. Cut me some slack?

  July 21, 2009 at 12:52 AM
MomentEye said...

  Even condiments
  Have reason to fear you, Lord.
  Still mustard is best.
  PDSM

  July 21, 2009 at 3:03 AM
Nyaz said...

  That is awesome Lord
  You can tell I was totally
  Not expecting that
  Did I do that right? I suck at figuring out syllables and stuff.

  July 21, 2009 at 7:13 AM
Sargeras said...

  @ AC:
  Edward Scissorhands
  alone can truly fathom
  my unwieldy plight.
  @ MomentEye:
  Mustard is like corn:
  Yellow, and a colonel too.
  (See what I did there?)
  @ Nyaz:
  Your second line has
  eight syllables, but some would
  argue that's okay. ;-)

  July 21, 2009 at 7:23 PM

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